This is the full suit of armor to protect the investment in your narrative.

Plainly put, you need to know if your story works and how much story potential you're leaving on the table.

And rewrites when the art has already started are absolutely disastrous in indie comics.

STANDARD COVERAGE FALLS SHORT

Getting a pass/fail score across key script metrics is abstract and almost useless to the individual writer. Your dialogue failed, your character arc failed, AND? Is it a quick fix or a full rewrite? What if the "fail" was a deliberate stylistic choice? The simplified scoring tells you something's wrong but not how wrong and gives you no foundation on how to proceed.

It's like a mechanic telling you your car failed inspection without telling you whether it needs a major engine overhaul or just a new pair of windshield wipers.

25 YEARS HAS TAUGHT ME, IT'S ALL ABOUT STORY POTENTIAL 

My Story Potential Assessment covers all the same bases as standard coverage, but instead of giving you a quick pass fail score, it delivers a 1-100% score on how much story potential the script actually taps.

The number is actionable, because the percentage directly represents how much potential you’re leaving on the table. The report tells you in brief, every area you’re taking a hit in and each area you’re nailing.

REAL ANALYSIS 

I'm the mechanic who tells you your engine is running at 30% of what it should and what busted parts are causing the problems. How much of that missing 70% you want to fix, is up to you.

This report isn't generated digitally by some program on auto-pilot. It's me. Someone with decades of experience specializing in your genre across every medium. Falling back on the same narrative fundamentals I've been teaching online for the last decade and putting into my own creative writing across comics, games, and novels.

RATES

Standard 22-page single issue scripts are $349 (up to 6500 word documents). For graphic novels or longer length works, email me Mac@NickMacari.com your active script document total word count, planned final page count. and other project details, and I'll get back to you with quote within 24 hours. 

*Full refund if the project isn't a fit after initial review.